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Identifying Rhymes

How do we identify rhyming words? In pop music there is significant liberty taken in what constitutes a rhyme. Consider the following words that are rhymed:

  • “hard” and “are”, “heart” and “are” (Just the Way You Are
  • “goes” and “clothes”, “stoned” and “alone” (Piano Man)
  • “fireman” and “retire man”, “Mississippi” and “skippy” (Uptown Funk)
  • “lemonade” and “make”, “need her” and “leaves her”, “difference” and “compliments”, “just ask her” and “disaster” (Beautiful Disaster)

Really it's insufficient to consult some rhyming dictionary to see if two words match. It's going to require looking at the phonemes.

Pat Pattison's Songwriting book

“Rhyme creates a sonic roadmap: it tells those eyeless ears where to go and when to stop.” “Rhymes in a lyric are the ear's road signs, just like lines in poetry are the eye's road signs.” “Too often, the available rhymes have been used so much that they've become cliché.” Additive and substractive rhymes are valid alternatives in order to avoid clichéd writing.

Pat Pattison's Songwriting Coursera Course

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Rhyme Scheme, Part 1

Couplet is the single-most stable unit:

  • 2 lines
  • Equal-length lines
  • Rhyming lines

When used as a steady diet, the song feels long.

Fragmentation is the division of lyrics with “stops” where the rhyme scheme has a natural break. The full-stop results from reaching a stability.

Another stable sequence:

  • 4 lines
  • Pairs of lines are equal-length
  • First and third lines also rhyme

Deceptive Cadence is instability created by deviating from the expected. It draws attention to the deviation.

Rhyme Scheme, Part 2

In Memoriam Rhyme Scheme (ABBA) is an unstable rhyme scheme. This is a retrograde, which you're not likely to hear.

Groups are defined by the rhyme scheme.

The pauses or fragmentation delineate ideas. Stability resolves not only the rhyme, but also the idea.

ABAB creates an avalanche or motion, it spotlights the end of the ABAB.

The balancing line turns on spotlights. Asymmetric rhyme scheme creates instability. Transform the same song using different rhyme schemes.

Perfect Rhyme

Leonard Bernstein calls the melody the “noun” and the harmony the “adjective”.

What if you had to finish every line with the tonic, root in the bass, sing the root? We want to create different feelings. Rhymes are the same way: there is a scale of rhyme types from most resolved to least resolved.

Perfect rhyme (full resolved):

  1. vowels (by sound) are identical,
  2. consonants after the vowel are identical,
  3. rhyming syllables begin differently (required to create some minimal tension)

Identity is when identical words are rhymed.

English is a rhyme-poor language because:

  1. It doesn't use word endings for grammatical purposes (cf. Italian)
  2. 17 vowel sounds (cf. 5 in Italian)

Family Rhyme

Consonant groupings are groups of consonants that use the air column in the same way:

  • plosives (voiced:p,t,k; unvoiced:b,d,g) - interrupt sound and explode, unvoiced
  • fricatives (voiced:v,TH,z,zh,j; unvoiced:f,th,s,sh,ch) - impeding, but not stopping sound
  • nasals (m,n,ng) - voiced through the nose

Family rhyme (less resolved):

  1. like Perfect rhyme EXCEPT
  2. consonants after the vowel are phonetically related (e.g., mud, rut, truck, cup)

Referenced in “Writing Better Lyrics”

Vowels are king, first-class citizens, royalty; consonants are second-class. Lyrics are a “vowel-exaggerated medium”.

7-8x more rhymes by considering family rhymes.

Short rhymes give you more acceleration (e.g., “talking with davy who's still in the navy”). So also do imperfect rhymes.

'''Finding Family Rhymes'''

Using a rhyming dictionary:

  1. Find your vowel sound
  2. Search all words by vowel sound and final consonant

Additive and Subtractive Rhyme

Additive rhyme: two words or syllables, the second of which adds something Subtractive rhyme: two words or syllables, the second of which removes something

No families with l,r,y,w,x, but can be used in additive/subtractive rhymes

Additive: go from shorter to match something longer(e.g., cry→smile) - more stable Sutractive: go from longer to match something shorter (e.g., smile→cry) - less stable

Assonance Rhyme

Very unstable

Assonance rhyme:

  1. share same vowel sound
  2. ending consonants come from different families

Important because it allows rhyme to be used expressively

Consonance Rhyme

Least resolved rhyme

Consonance Rhyme:

  1. vowel sounds are different
  2. consonants at the end are the same

Example: friend and wind, one and gone

Great summary with examples of each rhyme type in this video.

Rhyme type itself creates an emotion.

My Thoughts

friend and wind are close than friend and wound (i.e., there are some vowel sounds that are closer than others)

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